121. Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
Communication with people is one of the most important aspects of our social lives. Certainly, Interacting with people is crucial in our social situation, career, friends and even our family lives. It seems to me that, behaving with people changes our ways in life, these behaviors are based on our knowledge about individuals' character. Some people tend to analyze other's personality in the same breath and judge about them immediately. On the other hand, most of the society, including me prefers to gain awareness in each person’s case in a long period. I myself, think it is better to find in...
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- 121.Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare the 90
Sentence: In these circumstance we will not judge about people truly, because we our saturated with our especial feeling.
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Sentence: Generally, nowadays because of complicated relations among people, everyone likes to be known as a best one.
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Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: But after a time span, knowing them I percept that, I was wrong and my thoughts were completely unfair.
Error: percept Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Perhaps some times we find our first feeing true but it is very risky to trust to that.
Error: feeing Suggestion: feeling
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