121. Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
Communication with people is one of the most important aspects of our social lives. Certainly, Interacting with people is crucial in our social situation, career, friends and even our family lives. It seems to me that, behaving with people changes our ways in life, these behaviors are based on our knowledge about individuals' character. Some people tend to analyze other's personality in the same breath and judge about them immediately. On the other hand, most of the society, including me prefers to gain awareness in each person’s case in a long period. I myself, think it is better to find in...
- Students at a university often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of liv 60
- 181 In your country is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- 152.Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. 95
- 121.Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare the 90
- Tpo 22 integrated writing 80
Sentence: In these circumstance we will not judge about people truly, because we our saturated with our especial feeling.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to we and our
Sentence: Generally, nowadays because of complicated relations among people, everyone likes to be known as a best one.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: But after a time span, knowing them I percept that, I was wrong and my thoughts were completely unfair.
Error: percept Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Perhaps some times we find our first feeing true but it is very risky to trust to that.
Error: feeing Suggestion: feeling
flaws:
No. of Words: 558 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 558 350
No. of Characters: 2570 1500
No. of Different Words: 253 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.86 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.606 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.587 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 165 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.241 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.975 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.621 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.481 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.233 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5