Do you agree or desagree with the following statement?
The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the idea that the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns for the following reasons:money takes care of oneself and one`s family, money bring self-esteem to some people, and money provides means of helping other people in need.
First of all, almost everyone needs money in order to afford his or her needs. In our society, the common lucrative source is work. In other words, without earning money from work, many people may not able to survive. Since money has taken such an importance in one`s life, it altumately becomes a priority for many people. People may enjoy their work, workplace environment, but the bottom line is earning money so that they pay for what they need in their lives,
Second, earning money can raise someone`s self esteem, happiness and wellbeing. Money earned from work represent for many the fruits of their work. To put it in other way, when workers are receiving their paychecks, they may experience a sort of proud of their accomplishment and feel much better. To illustrate this, when my coworkers and I line up waiting our paychecks, we all are happy. I have ever experienced such a atmospher during the other days or work hours. In other words, receiving our paycheck make us very excited because of the importance of money.
Finally, our paychecks also help us think of other people in needs. We can help them feel better. Money can also pay our taxes, helps contribuate to our churches developpement. For instance, it happens to some people to send a check to local charities so that they make other feel acceptable. For these people who donate a part of paycheck, this shows how money earned from work are very important and beneficial to both sides.
In conclusion, I support the idea that the money earned from work is the most important for many.It contribuate in building up one`s self-esteem and one`s proud. That money also help us reach out to other who are in needs.
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Sentence: I agree with the idea that the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns for the following reasons:money takes care of oneself and ones family, money bring self-esteem to some people, and money provides means of helping other people in need.
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Sentence: Since money has taken such an importance in ones life, it altumately becomes a priority for many people.
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Sentence: In other words, receiving our paycheck make us very excited because of the importance of money.
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Sentence: Since money has taken such an importance in ones life, it altumately becomes a priority for many people.
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Sentence: Money can also pay our taxes, helps contribuate to our churches developpement.
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Sentence: It contribuate in building up ones self-esteem and ones proud.
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