Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Each individual has different need and different interest to live in a small city or big city. Some people prefer to live in small town and others like to live in big city.Personally, I prefer to live in a small city. For me living in a small city means being around the clean environment,like the sense of community and being around in the quiet place.
To begin with, I think that people live in the small city means they are in the favor of clean environment.Nowadays, the most of the people like to live in small town to avoid the nagative impact of the environmental factor of large city.In small city we can find clean environment because of having less traffic and less people.I live in a small town so that I do not have to worry about the large traffic and a lot of people being around with me. Also,small city offers good environment due to having more protected forest and having enough access of water for human consumtion.
In addition to environmental factor, I feel that people like to live in small town because of being in favor of the sense of real community.It means, people of small city take care of their neighbor as well.They share their happy and sorrow with the people of their community and support each other when in need.Some people may not like it but I think that most of the people like this kind of supportive environment. Personally, I prefer to live in small town because of this real reason.
Finally, in combination with environmental factor and sense of community, people like to live in small city due to its quiet environment.Nowadays, due to increased population pressure and increased industrialization in the large city, people seem looking for quiet environment for living their life. As a personal example, I move in the small city few years ago to avoid the extreme condition of the large city and now living small town.
In considering the issue of living and place, I have explored the reasons of preferences .These factor include people like to live in small city because of environmental factor, real sense of community and interested to being around the quite place.These factor may not be persuasive to other people but these factor lead me personally to prefer to live in small town.
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Sentence: To begin with, I think that people live in the small city means they are in the favor of clean environment.Nowadays, the most of the people like to live in small town to avoid the nagative impact of the environmental factor of large city.In small city we can find clean environment because of having less traffic and less people.I live in a small town so that I do not have to worry about the large traffic and a lot of people being around with me.
Error: nagative Suggestion: negative
Sentence: Also,small city offers good environment due to having more protected forest and having enough access of water for human consumtion.
Error: consumtion Suggestion: consumption
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