Some people think that human needs for farmland,housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?Why why not?
Personally, I agree with the notion that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.As a human being we should consider animals as well, however, In my opinion, human beings are the superior creature of this world and we should take care of them first.When we be able to think them first then they can do for the rest of the things for better world because human being are considered as a source of intelligent, wisdom and have an ability for creating environment for better place to live in in the world.
To begin with, human being are the greatest creature ever made in this universe.Because of having superior intelligence power to lead the world, it is important to protect and promote them first.We can imagine that what would be, if the human being are not existing in this world.Obviously, the world would be leaderless and will be immediately developed as a fighting place.So only human has the ability to judge for the right and wrong and do behave accordingly.
In addition to intelligence, human has the power of wisdom to do variety of different things for the betterment of the world.For example, we are now living in this advanced society because of having this capacity.Human has the super creative brain to analyze things and need and they have the ability to create new things like modern technology and making the world as a better place to live in for all type of creatures.As an example, nowadays after developing some farm land , housing and industry for human need protection and promotion, preservation for the endangered animals has already been started to preserve them too in many country of the world.
Finally, in combination of intelligence and wisdom, human has the capacity to create environment for better living place to live in.Even though having some distraction among them, human has established the world as a safe place for living.For example, we can begin from our single family to large world. People live in their own rule regulations in family as well as in the country .These rule and certain disciplines are all made by humans.
In considering capacity of human as having intelligence, wisdom and creating power for better living, I would have to say that human kind are superior creatures so that we have to think about preserving them first and enlighten them first.
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