Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should spend the most money on national defense.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People may have different ideas about how government should spend money. Some people might think that government have to spend more money on national defense.However, I personally disagree with the notion that government should spend the most money on national defense. From my perspective , I am in the opinion that government should spend the most money on health, education and infrastructure than on national defense .
First of all,government should spend the most of money the national budget on health system. Nowadays, along with increasing population, government have to focus more on improving and developing health system. I have opinion that every government in the country should think about how to make healthy citizen to serve for their country and have to spend more money accordingly.I find that the nation who is investing more money on health system, that nation is in good condition in terms of having good health indicators.For example Canada is a model country showing to the world that Canadian people has good health status in comparison to other country in the north America.
In addition to more financial support for health system, government should seriously think about how to provide more money to education sector.When the government invest more money on education sector, its' people become more aware on education.It means, people become able to do things with their own instead of getting other's support for doing things.With the increase in educational awareness, the quality of education will increase automatically and as a result it may increase the life stander of the people.Because educated people can do better for their own concern and for nation as well.
Finally, in combination of more budget for improving health system and more financial support on education sector, I find that infrastructure is equally important for country's overall development.In today's world, without infrastructure development it is perhaps impossible to pace the development of the country. So nowadays, the most of the country in the world seems concerned about improving their infrastructure.Even in the developing countries seems concerned about making roads in the rural areas of their nations and also appears as concerned about connecting transportation to the other countries.
In considering issue of financial support by government, I have explored the above mentioned fact in point.Though, people have different point of view, I am of the opinion that government should expend the most of the government budget on health, education and in infrastructure development rather than expending more money on defense system of their country.
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