Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Both ideas have merits and demerits.It depends on people's interests and need.People might have different opinion according to their need and interests. Personally, I agree with the idea that to move number of times through out their life rather than spending their entire life in one place.For me, it means looking for a better job, searching for better community and searching for better climate or avoiding extreme climate condition of that place.
To begin with,I think that people move one place to another in search for better job. In today's technology, people have to search for jobs frequently to fulfill their requirement of their life on the one hand and to update about the new learned skills by selecting that new type of jobs. By way of example, even though working in the same place due to my personal reason, I have to work with new people in every 3-6 month because of this movement for job.
In addition to better job, people move in finding better place to live in.Nowadays, in the USA, there we can lots of different culture and ethnic groups and continent and countries so that people always searching for the better community to live in.As a example, my neighbor told me that she is selecting this place to live in as 5th place
in her life.
Finally,In combination with searching for better job and finding proper place to live in, people move from one place to next place to avoid extreme climate condition.In the USA there exist a variety of climate condition.For example, there is extreme cold in Rhode Island (less than -10 degrees)and Extreme hot in the Texas in hot season.So people usually go to the colder state from Texas to be far from extreme hot condition(More than 87 degree foreign- height)
In Considering living in one place and moving, I have explored the issues such as searching for better job, finding the proper place to live in and to avoid extreme climate conditions.These factors may not be persuasive to all people, but they lead me personally to believe that move from one place to other place number of times rather than staying in one place.
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