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TOPIC# 23 In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea?
It is often said that wisdom is the product of experience, and experience can be extensively gained from working. I strongly believe that having a part-time job is beneficial to teenagers on the grounds that work grows them more mature and more economical. For these reasons, I feel that it is a very good idea to consider a simple job for adolescents.
To begin with, an easy job can introduce teenagers into the early adulthood. Adulthood is when somebody accepts the responsibility of his life and actions, and becomes independent. A working teenager has some obligations at the workplace that ...
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