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TOPIC# 30 It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose? Why?
A new high school in the neighborhood might be a good idea for those having teenagers, since they would probably enroll their children in this high school. However, this does not mean that other residents would be eager, too. So not only I strongly oppose this plan, but also I do not recommend it to others on the accounts that;
First, a new school means much more crowd and traffic in the neighborhood. A new school would bring teachers, a lot of students, and their parents to the area. The hustle and bustle of the school community would disturb the calmness and tranquility of the area, espec...
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not only I strongly oppose this plan, but also I do not recommend it to others on the accounts that;
Not only...but also is not used properly.
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Score: 26 in 30
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 387 350
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No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.435 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.654 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.474 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.751 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.498 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
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