The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
The table provides information on the sales of four main products, namely coffee, tea, patries, and sandwiches, recorded in a coffee shop located in an office building on an ordinary weekday. At the first glance, it is clear that coffee appeared to be the most popular product in the shop, and the highest sales came from the early morning from 7.30 am to 10.30 am.
As can be seen, the coffee shop obtained the highest sales in the morning between 7.30 am and 10.30 am, with a total sales volume of 700. The total sales decreased gradually in the next two shifts, with the figures of 530 ad 370 respectively. The evening shift from 5.30 pm to 8.30 pm, in contrast, reported a better sales volume than the former ones, with 465 in total.
Among four main products, coffee was the most polular item sold by the shop, with approximately 800 sales volume per day. Following that, pastries contributed a total of 600 sales volume to the shop’s revenue per day. Tea, on the other hand, was the least bought product with the sales of 270 during a typical day.
In conclusion, the earliest shift recorded the greatest sales made by the shop per day. The highest and the lowest sales volume were correspondingly made by selling coffee and tea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'ad' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ads'.
Suggestion: ads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66363636364 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43593958318 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531818181818 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4896999091 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302254728094 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12785494707 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913070535623 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193386262902 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771616139158 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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