The three pie charts provided compare the percentages of world residents according to the continents they live in together with th global expenditure on and consumption of resources.
Overall, although the largest proportion of the population dwell in Asian countries, USA and Europe take the leading position in consumption of resources.
Nearly three-fifth (57%) of world's population are citizens of Asian states. The shares of either Europe and America account for considerably lower index, at 14%. Only one put if ten people in the world live in Africa.
Majority of resources (60%) is consumed in USA and Europian countries, while the remaining 40% is allocated between the other unstated countries.
According to the third circular diagram, almost a quarter (24%) of the global expenditure is spent on food. The indices of transportation and housing take the following positions with 18% and 12% respectively. Money spent in clothing is two times lower than that if housing. However, all of the above-mentioned categories fail to outstrip the other unspecified trends which amount to 40%
- The charts below give information about world's spending, world's population and consumption of resources.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 96
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. 84
- The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. 84
- The bar chart shows the typical weekday for students in three different countries 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...es lower than that if housing. However, all of the above-mentioned categories fail to outs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39534883721 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03303427565 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2255019088 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105231640901 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375372152134 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476930701082 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587553148645 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498871791287 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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