some people spend a lot of money on tickets for sporting or cultural events?is it a good thing or a bad thing?
People have different hobbies and spend money to follow their hobbies. Some people have special affinity towards the sporting and cultural events and do not hesitate to buy expensive tickets to watch those events. I believe that there is nothing wrong in buying costly events tickets if people have interest in same.
There are various reasons for people to buy sporting or cultural tickets. Firstly, sporting is almost a religion for some people and they religiously chase their favorite team and motivate them on fields by being there in stadium. For most of the people, environment in sports stadium is infectious and seeing their nation’s team winning the cup is becomes lifetime memory. Besides, when their native country is playing against the other team, it considered as matter of pride and importance of game is converted to personal gains or loss. For instance, when India played with archrival Pakistan in cricket champion’s trophy, people from both countries bought tickets at soaring prices and showed personal emotions during game.
Another reason is that people like their cultures and want to support in best possible manner. Nowadays, owing to busy life style, many cultural events such as folk singing, regional play group suffer invariably and some are on verge of obsolete. People and government backed group organize events and people buy the tickets even on high prices. Furthermore, person feel unity and patriotism when attending such program with same mind set of people. For example, when Indian singer Kailash kher shows are organized outside of India, people do not think about their pocket size and do extravaganza.
To sum-up, though everyone love to buy cheap tickets, for key sporting or cultural events even buying ticket at high price is not bad and I see this as positive for countries cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...There are various reasons for people to buy sporting or cultural tickets. Firstly, ...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...like their cultures and want to support in best possible manner. Nowadays, owing to bus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19463087248 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47240524839 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2705193728 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305446517786 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113511253881 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695788574475 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196699240216 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404047182876 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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