Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.
Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter, explain:
• Who you are and why you are writing
• Request these documents
• And ask whether you need to pay any fee for that
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen, who was a student of Sydney College of Australia. For your information, I had finished a presentation skill course before I graduated last year. At the moment, I have applied for a new job and the Human Resources Department has required some copies of my reports and assignments. Therefore, I am writing this letter in regard to asking for the related paperwork. All needed documents will be listed below:
- Two copies of my final assignments.
- Two copies of my performance analysis written by my mentor, Mr. Johnson.
- One copy of my certificate.
My company demands to provide these documents on 25th April. Therefore, I will be grateful if you approve my request as soon as possible. Furthermore, I am willing to pay for any additional fee in order to get these copies quicker.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Truong Nguyen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05921052632 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94595085343 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5477183365 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0833333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223092123685 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769950353422 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589591356362 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812729179295 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072557170194 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.