Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Laws change human behavior was always a debatable topic to discuss. Many people state that law is the only way to exercise control over the public to maintain peace. It is completely agreed that human way of behaving is governed by certain legislation's. This essay would further elaborate the reasons how people respond according to rules set by government with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, strict laws makes better countries and people respond to a situation in a orderly manner. Countries with stringent rules have minimal crime rate. For example, in Singapore smuggling drugs is a criminal offence and one has to face death penalty and therefore such activities hardly take place there. This example exemplifies that laws can alter people's behavior. Thus, there is an obvious link between laws and human behavior.
Secondly, in the UAE, kissing in public is a punishable act. Every citizen of this country is aware of the law and it's hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the country. This example clearly explains that absence of law may create an unfavorable environment for the smooth functioning of the society.
To summarize, the above analysis establishes that there is a strong correlation between law and human behavior. It has been proven that many countries use law as major tool for peace and security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'rule'.
Suggestion: rule
...reasons how people respond according to rules set by government with clear examples a...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tries and people respond to a situation in a orderly manner. Countries with stringent rules have mi...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...es and people respond to a situation in a orderly manner. Countries with stringen...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'break'.
Suggestion: break
... of the law and its hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06550218341 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63582609142 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4075958629 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292755137133 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102138889421 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732571615872 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172273061935 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683998330651 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.