In this days, the conception of illiterate is not those who cannot read and write, since the 21st century. The illiterate people are who do not learn about the new style of communication and business. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze the meaning of this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss the understanding of illiterate as a person who can not just read and write. At first, although, positively, the base of literacy is the ability of reading and writing, they are not the end of learning. reading and writing are vital to learning the modern methods of connection in the advanced world. For example, learning to work with computer and communication with internet tools such as social networks are needs for literates people.
In addition, while the businessmen work with traditional methods of trade, they can not prosper in their business that is a negative. knowing the modern business is an advantage for any of the businessman. the internet and its tools are the base of the new style of trading. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of prospered companies in the world turned up to electronic commerce and using the internet tools such as social networks and website.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the vision of illiterate of the 21st century, I profoundly believe that the illiterate are who that cannot contact and also trade with modern methods appeared in the current century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79739989761 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1236572962 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178442764381 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707919265907 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082658398798 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11872371911 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864821580997 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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