In the cashless society, people use more credit cards, what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of using credit cards and its corresponding impact sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that removing cash in the deals is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that credit card can be a plus in the economy, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support living in a cashless society. At first, in particle purchases that need to lower money, many stores do not agree to credit cards. However, the credit card is easy to carry off. The people can pay their purchase by pulling the card when needs a large amount of money. For example, to by expensive things such as Piano and a Car, it is simplest to pay money by card.
In addition, the credit cards may break or burn if we do not care for them. But their lifetime is longer then cashing money. Their harms to nature in less than paper money. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of forest trees are cutting annually to make money with them.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the benefits of depending people on credit cards far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85042735043 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68568239217 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4781412341 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16086692835 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544970341342 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511263834029 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945883084571 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434324483055 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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