Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution
Most of old people are faceing a lot of problems such as they feel lonely and do not have good health.Whereas,expert suggest that if the people who are they should spend time with others and doing exercise daily then they can live their happier and healther.Here i will discuss causes and solution.
To embark with, the old persons are suffering from many disease because they are busy hectic schedule and can not give proper time their health and most of time spend in their office so they do not give preference outdoors activity and suffer from obesity .many disease stems from obesity.Moreover, older people live alone because they do not want to spend their precious time with young genration because the person who are young those have new gedgets to spend their time and those are older most of time they feel irritated so generation gap is also responsible for thos factor.
Nevertheless,every person specially those are old age should take care of their health.For example,elderly people go outside for walking and join gym ann yoga classes with the help of this they can maintain their health and tackle health related problems and diet also play vital role in people life because when they eat healthy food then thay can reduce their obstacle.Apart from that ,they should spend time with their kith &kins and peer group when they sitting with their friend and gossiping each other then really feel relax when they talking with young people then they get information about technology how to use it with the help of this gedgets they can entertain ourself and feel happy.
To sum up, every cons has two stick new generation should spend time with old people and give information about everything then they feel good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, whereas, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56963053071 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.789917116 49.4020404114 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 358.5 106.682146367 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198278728306 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14686910423 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039441218451 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14686910423 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039441218451 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.