In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In past time when this packaging material plastic in form of bottles, wrapping to objects and many more was not present and causing no harmful to natural resources. While in today's life, to preserve and protect ediable stuff, electronic equipments, dialy use general stuff are emphasized to higher extent. In my personal view, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall discuss the both views by analyzing this argument and will provide a logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are multifarious reasons why plastic become a part of daily life of individual. On of them is ease factor which provides easily wrappable to gain productivity. For example, ediable items which are made from milk, wheat, electronic items. These commodities were packaging in paper but after plastic wrapping introduce, these packaging are emphasized in this plastic form. In addition, product manufacturers use these plastic material as it is easily available with durability.
Secondly, there are many unequivocal and ubiquitous examples for these plastic product as these do not decay with time. Upon burning, these cause some peril danger which cause cancer with damaging of respiratory system. Scientist has not discovered any enzyme which can recycle these plastic materials. If it is intake into any living species, it could choke respiratory tubes. For example, due to this we have bad air quality and ocean water is also opaqued to higher extent.
In recapitulate, while there are strong lucid evidences, in my personal view we should stop this plastic involvement in wrapping or packaging. I would strongly recommend that regime must campaign bad influence of plastic which exits in our environment and should be collect on priority basis from all dustbin debris.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35483870968 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76563654874 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8844961345 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171929278885 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05109872711 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03720346285 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102282947945 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220641485449 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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