The substantial influence of xenophobia in western countries have sparked a controversy amongst the public. although specific arguments denied social racism. A group of intellectuals debate otherwise and hold individual view. I am highly inclined to believe that racism should be banned by governments and individuals. The agenda of the this article is to discuss both sides and will lead to a legitimate conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why xenophobia is supported, but the most remarkable one lies in the fact that immigrants are taking job opportunities from native people which boosts unemployment rates. Moreover, immigrants who come with there families are usually making their own communities. Having said that lower class in western countries ignite racist reactions. Hence government should educate people about human rights and protect immigrant families. So, showing reactions against minority groups related to political behavior, NGO activities, political parties, welfare support, democratic policy, as well as foreign affair supports.
Contrary to popular belief, there remain remain drawbacks clouded up the potential influence of the unfairness, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that nationalism could bring all political groups together. Based on recently conducted research by a group of human right activists in a renowned university, xenophobia would lead to 50% higher economic growths than social liberal parties. For example, when my friend migrated to Australia he was under lot of pressure and tried to build up his own skill to be ahead of native people. It can be seen that unfairness in social terms could result in injustice reactions, extremist activities, social fairness, as well as national parties.
To recapitulate, while there are several divergent opinions on both sides, my sentiment is that disadvantage of xenophobia take more credence that its advantage.
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...als debate otherwise and hold individual view. I am highly inclined to believe th...
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...ernments and individuals. The agenda of the this article is to discuss both sides and wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60884353741 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90913378403 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.462303927 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112198552267 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347331295369 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311855563785 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633674046613 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304399510625 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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