Parents should be held responsible for their children's act. What is your opinion?

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Parents should be held responsible for their children's act. What is your opinion?

Submitted by Simthind on Tue, 04/24/2018 - 07:23

It is irrefutable that a number of juveniles indulging themselves in different crimes and unethical activities thus, jeopardising society at an alarming rate. So, it is widely debated at global level with some people reckon parents should legally held responsible for their children while others oppose it and stand on different side with the different views. In my opinion, the former proposition the letter.

There are a plethora of factors that I would like to substantiate my view point, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that offsprings spend most of the time with their parents in their early age. Moreover, children imitate their parent's activities by watching them and behave accordingly. Similarly, children also learn basic moral and ethical values from parents and parenthood can mould their behaviour in positive way at their younger age. Needless to say, all these merits of parents being accountable for their children's doings.

Another overt facet is that undoubtedly, parents do each and everything that they can for better upbringing of their children. However, parent's deep affection misguide their offsprings, and they go astray from their path. Hence, it is evident why many are in favour of this notion.

To recapitulate, one can conclude that it can not be denied that many factors influence children's behaviour, albeit the role of parents is a pivotal one.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...me people reckon parents should legally held responsible for their children while ot...
^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oral and ethical values from parents and parenthood can mould their behaviour in ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27232142857 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73558009159 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0170932301 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328726187443 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118730551782 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762856887825 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176317679307 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515967943654 0.0609392437508 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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