Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, abortion is increasing rapidly which they consider as legal while others are thinking as abortion is illegal. They are several points which we can consider the account to make it illegal. In this essay, I can derive the situations and health issues if they do abortion normally.
Generally, many of the countries have grown a lot but still some countries are not in the developing countries. Many people are still in below poverty and they can not handle the family. These people are planning to have an abortion when they get girl baby, their thought that they can not nurture girl baby.They don't have an idea and they don't have a much knowledge about this issue and what will happen to the mother.
First up all, on the abovementioned reason, people are considering to go for an abortion which will impact their health severely. some of them are affecting mentally and physically. Some of them, they are losing their weight and even miscarriage problems. Even the worst scenario, people are dying due to this problem. Other causes included such as vascular disease diabetes, other hormonal problems, infection and other abnormalities of the uterus.They are not much awareness provided by the government. Also, the government should be banned or illegal it this one in order to the public try to destroy one human being. We do not have an authority to kill anyone.
After slicing and dicing this, the government has to take the responsibilities to make it illegal or should be banned whoever plans to go for an abortion and also their duty to conducts some health awareness to all the community to avoid this issue. Women health always is very important to grow up the entire family with full of happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ght that they can not nurture girl baby.They dont have an idea and they dont have a ...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hat they can not nurture girl baby.They dont have an idea and they dont have a much ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rl baby.They dont have an idea and they dont have a much knowledge about this issue ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...ey dont have an idea and they dont have a much knowledge about this issue and what wil...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...hich will impact their health severely. some of them are affecting mentally and phys...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...n and other abnormalities of the uterus.They are not much awareness provided by the ...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...unity to avoid this issue. Women health always is very important to grow up the entire fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89419795222 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60525160085 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5306166791 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152620032242 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527558673086 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582060271222 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979532263141 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309555372898 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.