Some people say that fashion effects ourl live in a negative way other say that it has more positive effect on our lives
It is certainly true that nowadays everyone does fashion for looking beautiful which can be fruitful for them.Handful of people assert that the fashion has more postive effects on our live.However,in my opinion, it has more negative influence on individual .I will discuss both pros and cons in upcoming paragraphs.
Doing fashion has negative consequences for us.First and formost,everyone spends enormous amount of money on cosmetic products for looking beautiful.sometimes they take loan from banks and when they do not return the loan,then they.get disappointed which can lead towards unwanted consequences. In addition, people use cosmetic product some of them detrimental for their health.for instance, women use lipstics which have a chemical when they eat something then the chemicals go into their story.ACH which can become a cause of cancer.furthermore, if children will do fashion then they will not concentrate on their study.so it has many downsides.
On the other hamd ,it has few positive consequences also.To begin with,fashion gives a sense of looking unique from others. It makes us creative and when we do fashion ,then we feel energatic .Moreover,it gives the employment a lot of people.they earn their earning from the fashion industry. For example, shopkeeper whole saler and so on.
To conclude,I strongly believe that fashion should be followed wisely otherwise it can be detrimental for their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22640616959 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.614465155 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.714285714 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143449921862 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646258646112 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703633772593 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929834372404 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791730897757 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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