Students doing part-time jobs - advantages and disadvantages.
The trend that students doing part time jobs recently has become very popular from last decade. Many people claim that doing part time jobs can make them fulfill some of their needs. Others reject this notion and argue that these jobs can destroy their valuable study time. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that part time jobs could help students to gain knowledge about working culture before entering into original work field. This essay would further elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of these jobs with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, due to increase in prices and development of all industries, students need so many materials and goods to cope up with fast growing education world. Salary they receive from part time jobs are not only used for studies, they also use for entertainment activities such as visiting amusement rides, outing with friends and many more. As we know that all are not rich enough to pay their fees and buy necessary things like a rich kid. The only one solution that they could do is part time jobs. Due to the labor shortage, there are lot of jobs available for part time in the many fields working as waiters, delivery boys or even cleaning service. Apart from money, these jobs help student to learn the working atmosphere from so many people as partners. After gaining good amount of working experience from different sectors, students can decide what they want to become in future.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages associated with part time jobs. It destroys and kills our regular study hours. Students with high desire to buy something even though if it is not required will take so many part time jobs which leads to reduce in their academic marks. These jobs make students less efficient and in worse case will leave their studies for money that they have seen in part time jobs.
In conclusion, part time jobs could help the students those who came from poor family background. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that advantages of these jobs overweighs disadvantages.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-26 | Pinkey Lê Anh Thảo | 72 | view |
- Technological access to online music and the like should be free or paid. What do you think? 77
- Some universities deduct marks from students' works if given in late, what are your views and what action will you recommend to take? 85
- Schools should organize activities after class To what extent do you agree 87
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree. 96
- Should marketing for consumer goods companies like clothing and food focus on reputation or on short term strategies like discount and special offers? Why? 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
The trend that students doing part time jobs recently has become very popular f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...st decade. Many people claim that doing part time jobs can make them fulfill some of thei...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ompletely agree with the statement that part time jobs could help students to gain knowle...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ucation world. Salary they receive from part time jobs are not only used for studies, the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...only one solution that they could do is part time jobs. Due to the labor shortage, there ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ge, there are lot of jobs available for part time in the many fields working as waiters, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 884, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nts can decide what they want to become in future. On the other hand, there are many d...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... are many disadvantages associated with part time jobs. It destroys and kills our regular...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...if it is not required will take so many part time jobs which leads to reduce in their aca...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...tudies for money that they have seen in part time jobs. In conclusion, part time jobs ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...en in part time jobs. In conclusion, part time jobs could help the students those who ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1207.87684729 145% => OK
No of words: 357.0 242.827586207 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89915966387 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36394319895 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5710823683 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462371583585 0.242375264174 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155557236142 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963109057332 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323801401775 0.151781067708 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819530495732 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.