Computers are become a part of life and it influenced education sector in many ways, Now a days children reading their subject materials in online. However some schools are encouraging children to follow books. this essay outline the best mode of reading between both genres.
Firstly, schools are encouraging children to read online materials as they can track student progress easily. This means that teachers can track the percentage of study completed by every student on particular subject. In contrast to this, Children may misguided or mislead as part of internet ads and wrong materials. There are plethora of gaming adds displayed while reading online, Children will attract to them easily and loose focus on the studies. Furthermore, Eye related issues may affect children with this reading approach as they use electronic devices most of the time. Children can benefit through reading online books if they study in permitted time and follow only books which given by their teachers or school management.
Secondly, reading printed books is widely accepted method and proven correct since many years. This allow children to read more when compared to online books and easy to complete the materials but carrying books become a little hard task now a days. in addition to this, By using printed books, Children have to search for meanings in dictionary by using one more book.
To recapitulate, Reading printed books and online books has its own pros and cons. In my opinion, reading online materials help students to some extent and also it has more consequences but printed books is a best method to get good results.
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... more consequences but printed books is a best method to get good results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13483146067 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47976280779 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.391211561 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312779015873 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108847840231 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689384416199 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198826409707 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467731289107 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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