some people think to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
University degrees are become a very important to become successful in life. On the other hand, Few people think that it does not require to be succeed in life. As per my view, University degree not required to be successful in life. This essays explains the both views as below.
First and foremost, University degrees are required to secure a good job and organisations also look for people who are completed degrees but same time it also ask for experience. That means, They require both qualified and experienced people. Thus, We can not get job, Only having a degree in hand, For example, In my case, I was not able to secure a job after completing my degree in distinction due to lack of experience.
Secondly, Whatever learned in university will be used as theory and when comes to job, Practical experience required to apply. In addition to this, Few students get degrees with good marks but they don't success in their career as they always try to apply the theory which they learnt, For Instance, One of the class topper from my batch got the job in big company but he is struggling in career as he always try to think and work in the way he learnt. Few people also leading super life without university degrees as they focus on their work and learnt from their failures, Again failures come from experience and this help people to get success.
To recapitulate, University degrees always important to secure a job but this is not only option to lead better life. Similarly, practical experience also important to lead the successful life. In my opinion, Practical experience has lot of important when it comes to life and success in career.
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74394463668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59784866045 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477508650519 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7220912994 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252726512671 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116626939084 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590540661843 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179102051942 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084234755568 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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