The two pie charts show the petterns of expenditure in the US between 1966 - 1996.
The pie charts depict information about different patterns of expenditure in Amarica in two years 1966-1996.
It is clearly seen that food was spended maximum (44%) and computers was expended minimum (1%) in 1966 but food come down to two thirds and computer increased nine times in 1996. Cars was accounted for 23% of spending in 1966 where as it was about more then double in 1996.
The given line graphs highlights 10% was spending on furniture in 1966 but place of computer had taken by computers in 1996 and it was invested 2% than 1966 in1996. Expenditure of restaurants was 7% in 1966 on the other hand it was dramatically rised at more than double in 1996 but percentage of petrol was approximately equal respectively in both years.6% money was invested for books in 1966 however, it was decreased 5% in 1996.
It is,there fore, clear that food and car were spended highest part of expenditure in both years in comparison of others.
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entence: It is clearly seen that food was spended maximum 44 and computers was expended minimum 1 in 1966 but food come down to two thirds and computer increased nine times in 1996.
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Sentence: Expenditure of restaurants was 7 in 1966 on the other hand it was dramatically rised at more than double in 1996 but percentage of petrol was approximately equal respectively in both years.6 money was invested for books in 1966 however, it was decreased 5 in 1996.
Error: rised Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It is,there fore, clear that food and car were spended highest part of expenditure in both years in comparison of others.
Error: spended Suggestion: No alternate word
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