What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, air plane, or computers? And why?
The importance of computer, was always debated, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of antibiotics and computers have sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on past 100 years most important invention. It can agreed that computer has some positive impacts, but some people claim that antibiotics and air plane have some positive impact as well. This essay will elaborate how computers is most important inventions over past 100 years than antibiotics and air plane and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why computer is most important invention, but the most conspicuous one steam from the fact that computer can do almost everything faster than human. Computer technology is constantly being upgraded. For example, nowadays computer is used to solve higher level mathematical calculation as well as connect people from 1000 miles away.
Moreover, computer is capable of connecting with scanner, printer, mouse, USB sticks, phones, fingerprint scanner, music payer, video game controller, and etc which are made to make humans work easier then never before. For instance, data can be transfer in pen drive with security and privacy.
On the contrary, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that antibiotics and air plane are most wonderful invention in this world. Antibiotics help to recover from any sickness and air plane can take you to the other side of the world. An illustration, those are the inventions make human's life safe such as disease, travelling through sea.
From what has been discussed, it can be concluded that computers are most important invention for the past 100 years, but antibiotics and air plane cannot be overlooked. I personally think that computers are best for every one because antibiotics and air plane could not be invent without it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27152317881 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74741067679 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6296090767 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432453173325 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137322955998 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104441465732 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214985736203 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117265620525 0.0609392437508 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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