You have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student.
Write a letter to the newspaper to publish an advert. In your letter:
• Describe your apartment and the facilities available.
• What kind of tenant you would prefer
• When you want the advertisement to be published and how you would pay the fee.
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen. I am writing this letter regarding to publishing an advertisement of a room for rent in my apartment.
Allow me to give you a brief information about the room. It is a five-square room which fits for one person. Currently, the room has one single bed, one closet and a table. The tenant can use a shared bathroom and kitchen. Also, there is a washing machine in case he or she wants to do the laundry in the apartment. If not, there are a handful of stores which cover most of tenant’s needs in town.
Since I am currently studying in college, I would prefer a student to rent the room out to. Also, he or she need to transfer a fee of two million VND to my bank account every month. Last but not least, please kindly put my advert on the newspaper on June 1st.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Truong N
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37951807229 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55521831925 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5465044077 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.9230769231 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211874405249 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632293254276 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613900089198 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100152744884 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340548259187 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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