Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g.; tennis and swimming. Discuss about both views and give your opinion.
Sports are a versatile activity that is beneficial for both mental and physical fitness. There are variations of sports that can be played individually or in teams. A section of people find team games better while another section of people asserts that game played individually are more advantageous. This essay will discuss both sides of this coin.
Games played in teams inculcate certain qualities among players. G=For instance, team spirit and cooperation. Although, each player in the team plays significant role but a match is won only due to the effort of complete team. Games play in groups also showcases unity in diversity. For example, national cricket team of India comprises players from different region of the country. Despite this fact, whole team strives towards common goal, which is to win. Furthermore, team sports do not burdens a single player. Last but not the least, during the game it is much easier to decide and discuss upon game strategy and execute it within a team.
However, sports played individually have their own merits. Since there is only a single player involved, it is easier to showcase ones talent. Person winning the game gets complete credit without sharing their success with others. Moreover, a match lost is the complete responsibility of the same player, therefore no blame game exists. Overall, playing a game solo boosts player’s confidence develops skill to handle pressure and enhances presence of mind.
To conclude, for the whole sole development of mind and soul, it is significant to participate in as well as individual sport. As long as a player is passionate of his game, it is irrelevant whether team game or solo game is preferred.
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- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g.; tennis and swimming. Discuss about both views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'burden'?
Suggestion: burden
...to win. Furthermore, team sports do not burdens a single player. Last but not the least...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ayer involved, it is easier to showcase ones talent. Person winning the game gets co...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'boost'?
Suggestion: boost
...me exists. Overall, playing a game solo boosts player's confidence develops skill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12186379928 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70573949123 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7498524626 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2105263158 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6842105263 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173142941587 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625723757809 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071563525464 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122240377054 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105046896028 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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