Recently, the phenomenon of the abundant of governments and organizations problems and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that most pressing issues are highly beneficial, such issues are regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by substantial a number of individuals. I am inclined in this believe that finding solutions for the inhabitants can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to claim that the issues of environment and population are most pressing for the people in our plant. At first, the climate change is the consequence of the environmental pollution. Producing diverse gasses such as greenhouse gasses and carbon dioxide are the cause of global warming. However, these gasses can be declined by governmental roles. For example, the government's legislation could prevent the many factories and industries to produce these toxic and harmful gasses.
In addition, increasing in young people has a positive effect on development in the economy. But, rising in population is a substantial issue for the governments. The governments are facing a lot of problems such as providing food sources and creating jobs and unsatisfied people with their services. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers in 2015 has shown that a significant number of governments cannot be responsible the enhancing demands from their too much population.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic and the solutions, I profoundly believe that environmental problems and population increase are main issues that governments have become concerned about them.
- The birth rate in most developed countries begins to fall and aging increase. What can be done now to deal with this situation? 77
- schools should prepare students for university rather than work.how far do you agree with this statement.support your point of view with reason /or example from your own experience or observations. 73
- A company’s higher level authorities should get their employees’ inputs during decision-making processes. Discuss. Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 88
- Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 77
- Laws can change people’s behavior. Do you agree o 88
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Suggestion: governments'; government's
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...roduce these toxic and harmful gasses. In addition, increasing in young people ...
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...emands from their too much population. In conclusion, while there are several c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15457083432 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6673474537 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203737721401 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626244778162 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507384978677 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110620263077 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377135270541 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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