Tackin one side of the argument , there are people who believe that parents are responsiblities for transporting their children to school .They raise many assertions in defence such asdrivers are very careless regarding the safety of children .They often make use of mobilephone while driving as it is not beneficial for children as it can lead their life to danger . A particulary be at best epitome of this is that every parents love their children very much so they would safety drop and pick them from school .
On the flips side , there areantsgonists to this assertion who believe that the government
responsbilities for pick and to drop the children to school . The bolstet their view point by claiming that 'In this modern era ' both men and women have to earm to fulfillthe need of their children as they donot have enough time for transporting their children ss it can lead the government have responsibility for transporting children .
Nevertheless , weighting both the opinion ,I believe that there is no single conclusion still , I take this ground one effective clap require the use of hands so it has both responsibilities to transporting the children to school .
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- some people believe that movies should be based on social stigmas while other believe that it should be based on real life hero. Discuss both views and give your opinion . 73
- Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However a more effective solution is to provide people a better education agree or disagree . 73
- Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0618556701 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02688415906 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561855670103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4994478509 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.4 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393893188568 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210350615217 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592019533711 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222840599866 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577142238786 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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