The maps depict the town center so called Islip before and after planning developments.
At the first glance, there will be several distinctions such as constracting highway, pedestrian way, bus station and two new accommodation.
Now, according to the current illustration there is a main road from West to East which connect school to the park by passing from two opposite shopping center. Additionally, the country side is located on North of the town.
The planned development outlines the town center will be surrounded by dual carriageway due to the fact that the country side will be destructed. Moreover, two new housing area are going to constructed in North-East and South-East of the town. There also will be a pedestrian line between shps and shopping center which will be accessible for the ones who are going to live on North-East accommodation. Furthermore, bus station and car park will be located in two different side of shopping center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'center' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centers'.
Suggestion: centers
...k by passing from two opposite shopping center. Additionally, the country side is loca...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'construct'
Suggestion: construct
...over, two new housing area are going to constructed in North-East and South-East of the tow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12101910828 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99918173486 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5196954651 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861269149117 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047975556909 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572231379237 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738155990718 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716254812081 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.