some people find that following a strict routine allows them to feel more in control. others, however, think that constant changes to routine make life more interesting and less predictable
Our life has changed dramatically since past 50years, owing to the technological breakthroughs. These technological advancements are completely changing the way we live our lives, which means that change is no longer a personal option. Although some people continue to practice their old routine while others, enjoys to adapt themselves to the time.
There are people who like to follow their old routine and denied changes around them, this is so because they feel secure and in control. These people are in a state of denial. They might resist changes but they cannot stop the world from evolving and evolution comes through changes. And soon they will realize that their behavior is socially unacceptable without any means of livelihood left for them.
On the other hand, the thought of gaining adrenaline rush through changes can be disastrous. The pace at which changes take place should be moderate so that we can enjoy our lives. Additionally, the world we live in is governed by capitalist and consumerism. These social ‘elite’ are the change makers which may not suit the society but it does profit them. That results in aggravating the bridge between rich and poor, destabilizing the society.in addition to it, the thought that the rapid technological advancements always aid in having a better life is not always true.
In conclusion, I would like to say that everything in life needs to be done at a moderate pace. Changes can be motivating and energizing, but too much change can leave people in constant adaptation and prevent them from ever being able to truly enjoy their lives. For instance, to enjoy the ice cream we must lick instead of eating it. There to taste life we need time and a haste life left us confused.
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Comments
two main issues:
two main issues:
1. try not to use pronouns as subject, like: they, I, we, you...
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
the e-grader will consider you can only write simple sentences.
2. you actually used words pretty well, but less than average, so e-grader gave a very low mark:
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
is this score will remain
is this score will remain same for ielts too.
May I know if my score is 6
May I know if my score is 6 here what would be in ielts exam
The main purpose of
The main purpose of practising in testbig site is to find out the flaws in essays. We actually don't know how this essay will score in the actual exam, but we understand from all the essays you sent, that you should get around 7.0 in average compared to other users.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoys adapting'.
Suggestion: enjoys adapting
...ractice their old routine while others, enjoys to adapt themselves to the time. There are peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97269624573 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77059540666 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9296271056 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179224449823 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570314154048 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568681414074 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111551541558 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384632758848 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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