Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
As a result of technological development manual work is largely replaced by machinery works .In my opinion the positive changes brought by technology into our lives undoubtedly outweigh its negative impact.
The introduction of machines into our homes have numerous merits. To start with it has made our household chores quit easier in addition to making it less time and energy consuming. In the earlier times simple houseworks used to take long hours, and usually women had to stay at home to perform this tasks. Nowadays these chores barely take any time thanks to modern inventions such as dishwasher, washing machine and vacuum cleaner just to name. As a result of this development women are now able persuade their career while still maintaining their social and family lives under control.
I admit some may argue that these machines are contributing a great deal to the environmental pollution as a result of their continuous need for energy supply which in most parts of the world is still provided through fossil fuels, however this does not necessarily mean that we should go back to the era were everything used to be done by hands we must replace fossil fuels with renewable energy sources.
In conclusion, although there are some unavoidable downsides in using machines to do household jobs, it seems that they are more beneficial than being detrimental.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6967347694 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694690265487 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6113946986 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173790894726 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615188350326 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520847534835 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932702467267 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482235872601 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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