Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as released from prison.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What possible solutions can you suggest?
Criminals tend to commit more crimes after being released from prison. This is a complex, multi-factorial issue that we'll address in this article.
One of the reasons why criminals tend to commit more crime after being released from prison could be the fault of the prison systems itself. Non violent offenders get incarcerated alongside violent offenders and this might cause the non-violent offenders such as those who are sentenced with drug charges or fraud become more violent in order to protect themselves or join a criminal gang for protection.
Another reason might be the lack of a system to integrate criminals after their release. Criminals often face difficulties in finding jobs due to businesses and employers being hesitant to hire a person with a criminal record, even people with minor charges such as posession of an illicit drug. Furthermore, many countries deny the right to vote for people with criminal pasts and this might make them feel cast away from society.
There are many ways to fix this problem, one being seperating people with minor charges from those who have commited murder, delt drugs or more serious charges. This will allow the inmates to be away from the influence of gangs and be less likely to turn into violence. Another way is rehabilatating the criminals in order to be law abiding citizens and try to integrate them back into society by finding them jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03418803419 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57198219472 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2520741982 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173323423581 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867265622501 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675009033613 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130420708244 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531846946949 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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