In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
There is no doubt, the population is increasing day by day all over the world, however, some countries are taking action to control the increasing population. As a result, old people are increasing when compare to youth. I strongly agree that this is leads to negative impact, behind this several reasons are there I discuss in this essay.
First of all, old people are always with good experience and knowledge, but, health is more important in any nation development. In other words, nation nothing but human beings if people strong and healthy, then country becomes strong and developed. For example, India is one of the growing fast country, the main reason is India has 50% youth people. As a result, companies who want more man power chose India without doubt, that’s why India is developing fast. Moreover, China country also got this point, revised condition on new births.
Secondly, the technology has been ruling the world, however, aged people are unable to handle the new technologies. In detail, people should learn and follow the new path according changes in world, but, senior citizens cannot learn and update as much as youth do. For instance, 15 years ago, there was no smart phones and easy access of internet, but now the world occupied the internet and smart phones, besides, most of users of internet are teenage and young people. Moreover, young people think new and invent new as per current technologies.
To sum up, proportion of older people and young should be balanced, otherwise it will impact nation development and adopting new technologies. Seniors will give suggestions and culture to next generation and youth people learn fast, cause to new ideas. So, both people play impartment any country. Many, counties understood the formula and they are taking action to balance proportion.
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the users') or simply say ''most users''.
Suggestion: most of the users; most users
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
... next generation and youth people learn fast, cause to new ideas. So, both people pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54209012866 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.589992226 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121329880827 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406875329106 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364757864914 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749414433027 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234442261174 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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