Essay topics: Some people believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities, others disagree.
Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both views and give your opinion.
Now a days, private vehicles are being increased all over the world, due to this there are a lot of taffic jams and cusumtion of fuel.
Some people believe that bicycles are best replacement for cars and motor vehicles, while some people think that bicycles has several disadvantages.
As per me cycle is the good option who want to travel in short distances.
On one side, bicycle is not suitable for people who want to travel far distances and who likes to move fast.
The bicycles are slow to travel one place to other, moreover, people need to use their physical strength to ride it.
To add to it, bicycle is not a best option to travel long distance places, as well as, if there are any extreme weather conditions, riders will become victims.
For instance, recently some people suffered from sunstroke from my office.
On other side, firstly, bicyle are ecofriendly, it won't harm the environment any case and it is very cheap when compare with car.
For example, accoridng to WHO survey, 40% of pullution is being generated from private vehicles only. Secondly, bycles don't take much space on roads
as well as in parking places, but cars take much space, therefore there are a lot of traffic jams. as a result, traffic jams has been doubled since last decade due to over use of cars.
Finally, no need to spend money on fuel if people use bicycle, as less cost maintenance travelers could save much money.
According to me, bicycle has plenty of advantages outweigh drawbacks. this helps to keep us fit and healthy. Moreover, we can feel proud,
because we are supporting ecosystem and not threatening environment. besides, bicycle riders saving the lot of time from traffic jams.
To sum up, bicycle is the best choice who like to save money and environment. However, I recommend it when you want journey within city. However,
for long distance travel better to cars and public transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86280487805 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48409388153 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.53445328 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9473684211 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140592870574 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422092479997 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556490307846 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488828715751 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564520265181 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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