People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read, some excercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?
Stress and obstacles is an inevitable part of one's life and there indeed are no escape routes to this as it is part and parcel of life. People resort to reading books to control their stress while others prefer working out venting out all that loaded tension, and there are other he would like to spend some time in nature. Though these methods are efficient, I believe stress can be tackled through meditation and music.
In a world where people are forced to finish tasks before a stipulated time, they get apprehended if they are unable to do so. Meditation is one practice that can relieve people of stress, also can help them cope with difficult situations in life. For example, if a person practises meditation in the morning, they are all set to face the day's challenges. A daily dose of meditation will help one to connect with their inner self at the same time will help them to have clarity in thinking.
Another way to deal with stress is by listening to very calm music. Scientific study has shown that when one listens to music during a stressful moment, it gives an opportunity to the mind to wander in other matters making it tension free. Very calm and soothing music can bring balance to the blood pressure at the same time lets the listener relax. So, music is another alternative for combating stress.
In conclusion, by practising meditation and listening to slow songs can calm the being and also gives mental peace. People never know when they would confront a stressful situation and they must always be focused and not being susceptible to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... and obstacles is an inevitable part of ones life and there indeed are no escape rou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69202898551 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41447655144 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6533125546 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203864983218 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692576004163 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057697286063 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117565319621 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732069666791 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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