People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays people who lived in megacities have worry many problems in their daily life.
First of all there many jobs opportunities in big cities where have so much companies without employees or workers. But job was not for everyone , you should very good at your skills and experience to get the great job so there were many migrants go to the cities didn’t get the work or doing something they didn’t suitable for. Another problems is the cost of living in the big cities so high. The result is many people can pay for their bill tax or event their house and consequence of that they had to live in slums or the place without good facilities or clean food and clean water to used.
The second problem is the traffic jams.In big cities there are many citizens lead to has many vehicles in the main road at the rush hour.Beside things that people will very difficult to get home at that time, they have face to many problems about their heath. The fumes from vehicles make you get hard to breath and easy to get to be ill and the noisy from the street can make people feel stress and uncomfortable.Another consequence from traffic jams is it will destroy the environment make the air pollution or bigger is the greenhouse effect.
When lived in the megacities if people didn’t get a job or job with bad salary they could engage in criminal activities as a way of making a living, that the reason for crime rates have considerable increased in major cities in recent years.In contrast the police can’t take care for all citizens so many serious cases was happened and bring more concern to the people.
So all these problems the governments should encourage people to move to nearly outside of the cities.They need to convince of companies to move their build to smaller regional towns to make more job opportunities for people in there .And also the governments need to update the roads houses to help inhabitants easy to live , go and have a place more basically good and full facilities for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...portunities in big cities where have so much companies without employees or workers....
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or workers. But job was not for everyone , you should very good at your skills and...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...n't suitable for. Another problems is the cost of living in the big cities so...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...clean food and clean water to used. The second problem is the traffic jams.I...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... The second problem is the traffic jams.In big cities there are many citizens lead...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
... cities there are many citizens lead to has many vehicles in the main road at the r...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beside
...icles in the main road at the rush hour.Beside things that people will very difficult ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...ult to get home at that time, they have face to many problems about their heath. The...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...ke people feel stress and uncomfortable.Another consequence from traffic jams is it wil...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or bigger is the greenhouse effect. When lived in the megacities if people d...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime rates have considerable increased in major cities in recent years.In contrast...
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Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...reased in major cities in recent years.In contrast the police can't take car...
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Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...sed in major cities in recent years.In contrast the police can't take care for all...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d bring more concern to the people. So all these problems the governments sh...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...to move to nearly outside of the cities.They need to convince of companies to move t...
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Line 9, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re job opportunities for people in there .And also the governments need to update ...
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Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... job opportunities for people in there .And also the governments need to update the...
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Line 9, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... houses to help inhabitants easy to live , go and have a place more basically good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70786516854 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60389137721 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508426966292 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.853165129 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.222222222 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5555555556 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313424566443 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147506336019 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102553670534 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200465618686 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913739857508 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.