In recent past, the world has witnessed a sea change in the field of communication especially mode of communication which do not involve physical presence of individuals. It is argued that it has its own share of negatives and positives. In this essay, I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this form of communication.
On the one hand, one of positive aspects of communication which involves tool such as email or social networking is that it connects to the people without being present thereby decision making is faster now. People discuss their ideas, problems over mobile which give them freedom to do more at work place. Communication which needed individuals to be present was one of the biggest challenges faced by organisation which lead to inefficient workforce and profit in past.
On the other hand, one of the serious problems people are facing due to online socializing is that it makes them isolated. Gone are the days , when people use to meet in person and share their thoughts , but people these days prefer to stay at home and discuss thing over online tools. As a result, people are starting to spend the majority of their time alone at home without meeting others. Isolation of this kind is not healthy and can sometimes lead to depression.
In conclusion, although it has become more popular and faster to share information due to mobile ,and internet tools, it has brought about too many serious problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97107438017 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79897030151 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2498540876 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108372400597 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371473055397 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567506159209 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056829303979 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430881568224 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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