Today we are living in a modern world which has made our lives very fast. The pivotal need of a person is comfort, safety and time so he would be able to joy his life. In mega cities, people are making money but are having short of time for their lives. The mega shopping malls trend in the recent years has become very famous which is leading to diminishing the trend of buying from small shops.
The big shopping malls are very popular among consumer for buying goods. They can find from needle to car in one shopping, they do not need to bother to move from one physical location to other to buy another thing by throwing themselves in traffic jam and hassle of driving on the traffic jam roads. Shopping malls usually buy goods in big lots therefore they can offer cheaper price for the customers. Everything available in a single building will make possible for the mall owner to provide security, proper ventilation and other management. Consumers can get enormous facilities in a single building such as cafe to have a cup of coffee and have some rest. Parents can leave their children in play land inside a mall will enable them to mind free shopping without worrying about their children. Huge place for vehicle car parking available to enable them comfort about parking, as in big cities to find a car parking place is also very difficult.
In contrast, small shops usually buy goods in small quantity for consumers which leads the availability of fresh items. Small shops do not require large system of cooling because they have to manage small area for cooling and additional space will not likely to cover. It will save energy consumption for the government. People are living far from middle of city, they can buy items from the nearest shop. Small shops are usually around residential areas will lead to ensure the availability of goods and mitigating the need to driving a car and move to the shopping mall when some person is tired after working hours.
In conclusion, the shopping malls are making contribution to the country economic growth but usually big malls involves foreign investment which is taking profits outside the state. The small shops are also providing the benefits to the citizens and which have their own benefits. The government should make some regulation which should prevent the small shops from being diminishing and keep the mega shopping malls trends together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, another thing, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 31.9359605911 182% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1207.87684729 171% => OK
No of words: 426.0 242.827586207 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 3.92707691288 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34519613173 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 139.433497537 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509389671362 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 379.143842365 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8720735863 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219306368729 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090123271217 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112577256224 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191091470371 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155886949137 0.0609392437508 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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