Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by human
These days there is an ongoing debate between the people who think that government should spend some amount of money on space travel, whereas other think that money should be spent for current crucial problems faced by the human. This essay will further elaborate the reasons and explanations for supporting the notation and thus deduce the dialectic conclusion.
These days researchers are exploring new things in the world of space, which will help to determine the environmental problems. For instance, the air pollution which is causing damage to Ozone layer can be studied in a more detailed way by traveling to space. Hence I feel that government should be spent some budget on space travel to understand the problems that can occur in future.
On the other hand, some people believe that crucial problems should be solved first rather than investing money in space travel. For example, these days people are suffering from myriad diseases which are caused due to various factors, but the bad environment is one of the causes of deteriorating in health. So, I feel, health is the fundamental need of the citizen of any country and government should focus on health issues.
In conclusion, space travel and current crucial problems are equally important in human's life as it helps to improve the quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ore detailed way by traveling to space. Hence I feel that government should be spent ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... understand the problems that can occur in future. On the other hand, some people beli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05936073059 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54726591164 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9654872037 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.25397266985 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246783254047 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105903744912 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102535827337 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176007986073 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778630053256 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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