You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to put an official complain to you for some furniture that I received them at home damaged by your company.
Delivered items are a big coach, four chairs and tea table. When I made a booking with your company, your company accepted to deliver such big furniture. Long coach with special side stands is three seated, and four chairs are relatively small but extremely heavy. There was available space in the tuck; therefore, I decided to send also the tea-table in the same delivery order.
I have booked a door-to-door delivery service, and the offer was very interesting for that long distance. When the order has arrived, there were some serious scratches on the chairs, and one leg of the coach was broken. These items have a considerable amount of money; hence, your soonest action is required.
I took comprehensive insurance policy with your company, and my policy states that all items are covered. Therefore, you must to address this matter personally with your insurance department and review the attached invoices of all damaged items to be reimbursed.
Please let me know if your require any further infromation.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...t all items are covered. Therefore, you must to address this matter personally with you...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fromation. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65077911862 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.606116993 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217695177513 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668661682892 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497134892586 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108109891077 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623144854565 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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