Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages.
Few perportion of professional considered that it is useful for offspring’s have to prepare for a international language at elementary school instead of secondary school. According to me the merits of this notion outnumbered its demerits.
To begin with the profit of learning at primary school first and foremost, in childhood juveniles have great catching power and easily understand which they learn from their parents and tutors that is why teaching them foreign language in that age is beyond comparison by which they can broden their horizon of knowledge. Moreover, in the learning age children do different types of mistakes. Like, dialects,grammatical rules,into nations and denation and doing more more practice of these such things they can improve their learning skills and when they become mature they are already ready in their senior secondary to show their talent and uplift the standard of their knowledge. Furthermore, by learning foreign language they also become multi linguistic. For example, whenever they visit to any other country they not only do conversation in their own language but also talk in that country language. Which uplift the uplif the standard of their personality. As a result, these language play an vital in children’s life to find out supreme outcomes.
On the other hand, if they give more preference to international language in that age. Hence, they may forget the value of their own culture that is why they have to learn foreign language in senior secondary to some extent and keep touch with their culture to preserve it.
Tu sum up, learning international language is fruitful for every offspring but they have to give equal importance to their country language as well as foreign language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: , into
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Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...but also talk in that country language. Which uplift the uplif the standard of their ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this language' or 'these languages'?
Suggestion: this language; these languages
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ality. As a result, these language play an vital in children's life to find o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, as for, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25978647687 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92720580642 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1699256795 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234910864279 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961996027864 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060645026527 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162743669509 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054121766505 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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