At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to work alone or with others? Why?
The staggering progress of science and technology in today’s convoluted world is clear to everyone, and it is erected upon strong underpinning; hard work and effort. As an inseparable part of each glorious civilizations, working is inextricably intertwined with people’s lives. Implementing assorted strategies by modern academic societies, the face of working has utterly changed in comparison to the past. While some surmise working independently can endow them with overt constructive benefits, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that teamwork can play a consequential role in the professional world. The following paragraphs lend credence to this view.
To commence, what provokes people to work on a team is that it brings new ideas. To shed more light on this, every single work in general, and businesses, in particular, entail new, fresh ideas to succeed in the competitive world. By virtue of diversity in group members' thoughts and attitudes toward a specific issue, which provides unique and miscellaneous perspectives, innovative approaches can be generated to cope with existed issues. One particularly salient example of this is Apple Company – Every year it designs and produces a brand new model of the cellphone which fascinates many people due to its special features and innovations. This popularity is the product of a group of experts and specialists which has contributed their individual creative ideas. Consequently, working as a team is bound to create prosperity and success alike.
Another exquisite point is rooted in the fact that teamwork assists group members to surmount hurdles and problems aptly. Needless to say, collaboration within a group can drastically help solve insurmountable obstacles and problems with more ease. Brainstorming is an appropriate opportunity for the team to exchange ideas and come up with creative ways of doing things. By working together, the most convenient solutions can be produced that work best. Further and even more importantly, though, working together is bound to provide a supportive atmosphere. Teamwork creates a system to ensure that deadlines are met and that there is high-quality work. When one team member falls behind, there is another to pick up the pieces. When work is divvied up among members of a team, it gets done faster, making the overall business operate more efficiently. Hence, not merely do team working offer efficacious problem solutions, but also grant team members with supportive ambience.
In the final analysis, I have to reiterate my standpoint that it is working on a team that produces novel ideas, potential solutions, as well as, team supports. It is hoped that by implementing teamwork, everyone benefits greatly from its brilliant advantages affecting directly on the progress of any work.
- At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Universities should require every graduation students to take public speaking courses. Give specific examples and details to support your answer. 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own than by people whose views are different from yours. 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, well, while, as to, in general, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2392.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42403628118 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08839708155 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59410430839 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9806077741 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.727272727 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0454545455 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101168902341 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330178303118 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216105857285 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627008450192 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187894318797 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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