Many people believe that counties should produces food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the population increase dramatically around the world. People requirement are also increasing like more food, more water and more place to live.Local administration should manufacture consumable for all and should not rely on external sources.
Those who agree with the statement would view this as economic boost for the country. Placing industries in country for producing eatable items, will create job opportunities, will able to give the affordable food which eventually increase the buying power of their peoples. Importing less consumable will bring more investment in country which has a vital role is growth of all aspect of life.
On other hand, producing all kind of food in country will damage the economic stability. Firstly, some foods are available cheaply in other countries than producing in house.Secondly, Importing the consumable will decrease the prices for food in local market therefore, government will not invest in subtisize the things which eventually save their money.
In conclusion, i would like to say that producing all food and relying less on import will create instability in country. I believe that it should be balance between the import and producing foods which will grow the country togetherly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43298969072 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85620970748 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9061208382 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.111111111 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263542993233 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12071757648 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544237935707 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176679089125 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044390272198 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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