On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterdescribe the item you lostexplain where you lost the ittell the i

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain where you lost the it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this to bring to your notice that I have lost one of the valuable item in my recent vacation to SriLanka. The overall experience is good but it did not end as I expected. The lost item is a custom made small brown color wallet which contains my credit cards, business contacts and cash little over 12000 Indian Rupees. And it also has my signature 'GC' engraved on it.

During my trip, I stayed with one of the well known hotel chain. On my last day of the tour, I forgot to take the purse from hotel room since I was in hurry to catch my scheduled flight. After my return to India, I have contacted with the hotel management and requested them to check in their logs of room service. But to my disappointment they confirmed that they didn't find any thing in the room I was in.

Now, since I have opted for travel insurance, my air ticket covers the cost of any item lost during the vacation. So I request you to kindly provide me the insurance amount as soon as possible.

Ticket Details: AFTH75Q

Awaiting your reply at the earliest.

Yours sincerely,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...disappointment they confirmed that they didnt find any thing in the room I was in. ...
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Line 6, column 377, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...ent they confirmed that they didnt find any thing in the room I was in. Now, since I h...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46305418719 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34869491074 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0948810233 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203185116521 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677041268462 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724385939205 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100728061982 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989561969745 0.0580467560999 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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