It is sometimes argued that the age required to finish fundamental education for each individual is eighteen. In my opinion, I believe that forcing people to stay at school until this age is unnecessary because not everyone has the same conditions to go through eighteen years.
To begin with, it is true that people should build up their knowledge in the first eighteen years of their lives. Sticking with educational institutes in this stage of life will provide the basic skills the people need to prepare for their future. Thus, if a person decides to quit schools during this stage, he can miss a ton of important knowledge to have an ideal occupation later in his life. Moreover, the first eighteen years are the best time to drastically and effectively improve their basic skills. Indeed, scientists have proved that humans’ brain can process and memorize a massive amount of information in the first eighteen years of age.
Unfortunately, not all individuals are able to afford a full course of eighteen-year education. Firstly, financial problem is always an obstacle that keeps people from finishing their studying. Many countries, especially third-world countries, do not have enough fund to provide free or low-cost education for their own residents. Therefore, a majority of population in these nations cannot attend schools till they are eighteen. Secondly, some people prefer learning at home to going to schools. Many of them are still able to acquire full knowledge and essential skills without having to go to educational institutes. For example, David Karp, founder of Tumblr, is still the most successful and extraordinary wise person despite the fact that he decided to study at home when he was fifteen.
In conclusion, while the first eighteen years of life are the perfect time to focus on studying, I believe that making people stay at school in this stage is unnecessary because each one has a different conditions and difficulty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.165625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81416443805 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5258354874 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205018748655 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657767913067 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568205464898 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140357720153 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570338079666 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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