Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is much easier for people to achieve success without their family members’ help now than in the past?
In today's hectic city of life, in which life has trials and tribulations, vast majorities of people look for a better life regarding the trend of modern life. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether it is easier to reach success regardless of parents' help than in the past. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that nowadays, people could not even imagine their success without their parents' help due to the fact that they need support and incentive to make a progress day in day out. So, without support, it is not an easy task to do. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, a plethora of people especially youth try hard and bend over backward to reach their goals and gain a long-lasting success in their personal lives. Broadly speaking, in the past people's lives was independent and children did not rely on their parents' help. But today's the lifestyle has changed at a very swift pace and young people are not able to guarantee their future lives. So, it is incumbent upon parents to support their children. In this case, not only can children reach a conspicuous success but also can reach everything they want in a blink of an eye. As a tangible example, parents nowadays listen consciously to the words of their children when they are in trouble and need help. So, ideas and opinion provided by parents will provide fertile ground for people to address their problems vigorously and successfully. To elucidate more on this issue, people are now dependent on their parents in comparison to past, which people lead an independent life. So, living independently will create some problems and people will face myriads of obstacles and barriers when it comes to success.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that parents nowadays support their children financially, which makes reaching to success much easier. If we take a minute to ponder over it, in the past due to the paucity of fortune and wealth, hardly could people succeed because success needs patience and money. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that parents provide the budget for their children, so they can easily run their own business and gain an impressive success.
However, every coin has two sides. People these days even with their parents' support could not reach success due to lack of intelligence, hard-working attitude, aspiration, expectation, value and so forth. In this situation, hardly can people succeed even with support. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, as to, broadly speaking
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9158110883 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61956473807 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515400410678 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5481200209 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1363636364 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235141982855 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717043202376 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466233942873 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120078088689 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689504723004 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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