The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next five years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effect will these predictions have on developed countries. If they prove true? What can be done to deal with this situation?
It is undoubtedly the case that the birth rate begin to fall and one third of the population will be aged 65 and more in developed countries which is also effecting the society adversely. In this essay, I will examine the possible resonance for this term and suggest some practical policies that government could implement to overcome addressed problems.
First and foremost,this phenomenon could have many hazardous effect. With the rapid fall in birth rate and increase in the age of old people adversely effect the economy of country. As the population of youth declined as well as working population were diminished due to this productivity of that country could be sluggish. One good epitome for this is, according to survey that was conducted by Times of India, I'm this survey it has been reported that one industry in which worker with 65 plus aged were working, less contribute to the economy of their country because at this age period elder citizens want rest rather than working. However, one best options has to improve this problem is migration of young people from developing countries to effecting countries so that working population will be enhanced.
Secondly, the another effect on the country defence area will be weak out. As we know that government want forces; that will be healthy, young and active to protect their countries. Let if there will be no young force on the borders area other countries will getting more chance for invasion that country. To overcome this problem, it is not possible if we raise the birth rate how new born babies or children protect their country? Till that to maintain the ratio government keep good relationship with other countries so that other countries strengthen the effective country. Also by using technology new weapons update every month to crumb the problem.
To recapitulate, there are plethora of factors. It is not possible to have a prefect and complete solution probably this could be solved by government; by making: laws, child policy and by migration of young people from developing countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05539358601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63573621077 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527696793003 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6258507911 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285579531275 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105219052875 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926777266542 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180791324955 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744105417383 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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