Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Man, throughout the ages has undergone many changes,from the day he invented rotating wheels to the day when he can fly aeroplane without a pilot. Our transport system has developed in leaps and bounds, especially air transportation. However, some people feel that it causes environmental imbalance and exhaustion of our earthly resources. I disagree with this thought and let me elucidate my arguments in the following essay.
To begin with, it is unimaginable to think a global village without air travel. It will seriously affect the human population in large numbers. For instance, people in India travel to UK for pursuing higher education and is really a day dream without aircraft these days. Secondly, hefty volume of essential needs like medicines and vital instruments are transported through air cargo. Whereas, if we transport the same through seaways and roadways it would take around a month time to get the consignment delivered. Finally, the country will be pushed to huge economic crisis if at all the air transport system is dismissed and is really impossible too.
On the other hand, opponents opine it is the bane for our ecosystem. It has been stated in a recent research that if the trend goes like this we are in a serious threat spoiling our planet. This will also result in the non availability of fossil fuel in nature.
The situation can be tackled by some innovations which would involve renewable source of energy like solar and wind. The researches are already in progress to mitigate the current situation.
To conclude, I pen down stating that air journey cannot be suspended once for all but it shall employ some newer techniques in reducing the pollution and conserving the fuel energies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80045484035 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5825274304 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156032011789 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439482971908 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402424345471 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077373134322 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317793861283 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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